All Comments on 'Do You Want to Dance'

Probably the stupidest tale I have ever read.

+2 stars for entertaining dialect and creativity in writing style. -2 stars for gratuitous violence that just didn’t fit with the rest of the story.

Sometimes, you just should not press <Enter>.

I get the author wanted to write a BTB story. Not sure of the intention, but the story didn't seem very developed. Because of that, it just seemed confusing.

Recommend sitting on a story before posting and have some others read it from scratch. Good feedback would be enlightening.

Just awful. Troll the readers much?

Kind of lame. Really cut and dry. You can do better,

Loved the destruction of the Prick. He’s the head bad ass in the prison, and will be out in 25 years. He will be 50, and his cheating wife is still out there somewhere.

I like your style brother, and your Bio was fantastic! So honest and damn you're funny too!!

Too bad he fired the second shot. And a decent attorney would have plead accidental shooting of a suspect rapist, getting him a much reduced sentence. Just a thought. Thanks for eliminating the asshole. And thanks for the effort.

He went to the head of the prison class right away! Hilarious 5

I’m still trying to figure out what this shit was all about. He gets turned on by watching his wife with other men then when she decides to fuck one he goes off and kills the guy? This just made so little coherent sense that it’s a stretch to call it a story. I seemed more like a collection of random words.

I don't get it

My 1 star rating tells my thoughts. However, I think you're probably a better writer than the couple of stories I've read. Need to organize your thoughts, re-read the story, get a proof reader to doublecheck everything makes sense, etc., etc., etc. Bob