by Fleuron84
I was looking forward to this chapter and frankly was a little disappointed. For me, the heat of incest stories is the teasing and trepidation leading up to the family members fucking. This chapter didn’t have any of that. You still write very well and the mechanics of your sex scenes are really hot. But for me, it was all just mechanics.
Wasn’t there a part in the previous chapter that stated the good Doc chose not to have kids? Might have been a typo, a missed edit, or something you chose to retcon, but just a heads up. Not that I’m complaining — really enjoying this series.
Ah, just double checked. Chapter 1 said she never married but was a single mom. Disregard my previous comment!