All Comments on 'Doing Britney to Eternity'

Great story, you're a great writer. The way you made him play with Britney at first before the actual sex was also very well done in my opinion. I'm lookin forward to readin the rest of the story.

well i guess the story was good.i have read better, the story was really boring before brittany and steve started getting busy,and the grammaticial errors were frequent,and i had a hard time wondering if you even spoke english fluently because you would leave AND or punctual marks out...so next time you decide to write a story,make it proper and fun to read...

sincerely,

honest to my death