All Comments on 'Doll 001 Pt. 01: The Ceremony'

by JamieGray

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QJH1S0QJH1S0about 2 years ago

I'm sorry, but this installment was too much for me. I know someone likes this thing, but for me it's just fun and games, until someone get's hurt. Also I'm a sucker for "good" endings, and even if Jenny was the one wanting this, this is not one. I think Mandie should've stopped her, if she really loved her. I'm guessing Erin had a major role in that part. They could maybe let her be "Doll 001" only part time. The "forever for real" part is where the story lost me.

JamieGrayJamieGrayabout 2 years agoAuthor

This is certainly an extreme scenario, but it would useful to note that this is Part 1. As in this is a continuing story. It's not a bad end, it's the beginning of a story, and there's no telling where Doll will find herself.

QJH1S0QJH1S0about 2 years ago

Fair, but even though the story is continuing, Jenny's story is basically ended, with her being sealed in the doll suit permanently, and ceaseing to be a person, becoming an object, a doll.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Honestly I’d love to be turned into a doll myself. The part where Mistress and Jenny love each other is where they shouldn’t have been turned into a doll. A doll is for those that want to exist for others. Obviously there’s feelings so I don’t think Jenny should have became a doll for that reason if this story continues I’m curious where it can go but since now just an object seems it’s sex only now since the suit is permanently sealed.

ExtrawayExtrawayabout 2 years ago

I find the permanence incredibly hot. I’m excited to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is really hot, but everything leading up to the ceremony sounds like she’s going to be executed

JamieGrayJamieGrayabout 2 years agoAuthor

It was certainly meant to evoke that to a degree. It is a death of sorts. John died so Jenny could live and Jenny dies so Doll can live.

QJH1S0QJH1S0about 2 years ago

I never really understood this mentality of "killing" your former self and using your "dead name" after transitioning. Isn't that the whole thing about a trans person that they're the same person as before, just fixing their outer appearances to match their inside? And I agree Anon, the whole lead up to the suiting up is eeringly like an execution, and I had the same feeling ant the end, like the end of "Revenge of the Sith", when Vader is finally put together, and is awakened.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyalmost 2 years ago

Yes everything we move use abuse infiltrate or else has two sides, loke the dom and sub or wearer and controller or else .......both side can love it or hate it or force or feeling forced or else ....... The human mind is undetectable but the soul is big as the universe ...... Hopefully doll 001 is truly happy because Mandi will be suffering everyday watching this doll

matt_the_refmatt_the_ref10 months ago

Please continue this story - it is amazing! That image of Mistress and Miss Erin looking over Jenny one last time before being fully locked into The Suit has been stuck in my head all day!

What next for Doll 001?

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