All Comments on 'Dom Drive-Thru (750 words)'

by JuanaSalsa

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NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 2 years ago

Dinner was going to be perfect. Just like this story! =]

SprcuriousSprcuriousover 2 years ago

Very funny! Fast enjoyable read

VoboyVoboyover 2 years ago

"Doms 'r' Us" is, I still believe, the better name for the establishment in question... *sniff* Or Dial-a-Dom.

Nifty work!

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Excellent!

Speed training!

Enjoy the dinner…..

FortyninemikeFortyninemikeover 1 year ago

Not a fan of the short ones, but interesting concept. For a short it was okay

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Laughed my head off!! But you are going to need alot of cock cages and the female equivalent by next year!!! And instead of Deliveroo, how about DeliverDom's?!!

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