All Comments on 'Dominated By Football Rival Pt. 03'

This was really hot.

omg.... YES! your stories really turn my crank...

Please keep writing...you're so good at it...maybe a story outside of college, like a young professionals vying for a job, and the stud takes another guys promotion, girlfriend, and their female supervisor and male ceo in the process? Anything you write now is a must read for me...its so fucking good!

Prefer the pov to be from the top (like the coxswain story), but still enjoying these. Keep it up!

Most of your stories end being the same one.

Please make a part 4 I'm starting to really want to get fucked like that tbh by a real man with a BIG COCK

This was a really sexy story. I like the POV from the bottom's perspective and the story created so much anticipation across three chapters. Great job!

awesome story. Love when a hot stud has a small dick. Even better when he gets taken down and turned into a slutty pussy bitch.

I hope you do write part 4, and Derek makes Nick a total slutty pussy bitch. Begging to service his dick, made to wear slutty lace panties, maybe a cock-cage and a pussy plug so Derek is in complete control and decides if/when Nick deserves to cum. Which is only when he gets it fucked out of him hands free.

THIS story is THE hottest on my hot list. the full series is awesome - but THIS chapter is especially hot. i've pasted in some text (below)... on the rare occasion i make it this far into the story without cumming, THIS part of the story ALWAYS sends me into orbit

[Finally, after two minutes, Derek's 9.5-inch monster was at full volume. Staring up in awe, Nick unconsciously opened his mouth as Derek moved the head closer to his lips. But Derek paused with his shaft two inches from Nick's mouth. And waited.

After an excruciating minute of silence, he told Nick, "Tell me what you want."]

can't wait to read whatever you cook up next!

FINALLY!!!

The top stud quarterback nailed and bitched both his one-time senior quarterback's cherry holes.

Still way too much pussy, tits, etc talk. Yuk!

Loving every part of this series! Hope we see more of Nick getting pussified - so hot when big guys get taken down a peg or ten. Can't help but picture him being forced to attend practice with a butt full of cum all plugged up with a tampon.

I like this hot story but I think too much humilation was for Nick. I imagined an alternative version: at one point Nick is flooded with rage, he takes advantage of his physical superiority, he knocks down Derek, then fucks mercilessly the arrogant, big-dicked stud.

Can you make them fall in love at last?

Such a fabulous story!!! Thank you!!!

fuck hot story, please more, lock and shrink his cock in a chasity cage, humilate film expose him, let him sign contract as his manager, tattoo him as your property and sell his ass to teammembers