All Comments on 'Dominated by the Maid Pt. 04'

by mCyclade

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skyblader13skyblader13about 3 years ago

I like this I hope you continue to write.

thanks

NightdropNightdropabout 3 years ago

Great, would love to read more. Please do continue!

tinytimirelandtinytimirelandalmost 3 years ago

Excellent story. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The manipulation by Lara to fold Jenna into her plan was very clever. An unexpected twist that made Cal's predicament even better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story! I would love to see Lara totally converting Cal into her slave and eventually also little by little taking over the house. :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This made me more angry than horny. Cal is a helpless idiot and a victim. Lara is a manipulative sociopath. Jenna is a nparent. I'm out. Peace.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

ruined a fucking good atory by bringing parent into it 😒

P1KABO0P1KABO0about 2 months ago

I liked it until the mother got involved. Lara and Cal sneaking around seemed fun.

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