Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereAll the while, I flailed. This wasn't a simple spanking. It hurt enough to bring tears to my eyes.
But not sobs of shame. And not enough agony for him to win, though. I had the advantage, not him.
"I'll tell them." I jerked and twisted, falling to the floor. My scurry had me kicking his hand when he reached for me. And when he continued forward, my next kick grazed his cheek.
Fuck!
He rose onto his knees with a hold to his cheek. Yes, it terrified me. Men like him had too big of an ego not to react to physical attack. He might do anything to me since I instigated actual harm, it had been in self defense, though.
- COMMENTS
EssEssCehabout 1 month ago@ Gortmundy: This guy comes across as an abusive idiot a vicious, childish manchild of a fool because he is one. :o)
This series teach me some lesson: Don't neglect your character portrait and plotplanning before starting. It's very hard to commit to a story which isn't only developping as it goes but whiches veryfoundation like the characterisation of the two main protagonists is constantly shifting because also the narrative is shifting as if the author isn't too sure which kind of story he is about to tell.
Is it a social drama or is it a redemtion story?
Sometimes it feels like this plot is the honest version of 50 shades. At least in this story the wannabe dom millionaire abuser is shown in all his abusive childish stupidness.
Gortmundyabout 1 month agoInteresting story, well written, but this guy comes across as an abusive idiot who I have a hard time as seeing as anything other than a vicious, childish, fool, and she comes over as a weakling. I think I would look to defining the characters and their roles and relationship a little more. Still a good story though.
