All Comments on 'Donna's Teases Then Pleases Ch. 01'

I found this story rather tame and kind of boring.

You're proud of your wife for having cheated on you - betraying you and her marital vows, which makes her nothing more than a cheap, ditch slut; a whore with no principles, self-respect, morals and certainly no remaining love for you. You're a loser who pimps out his wife to friends. How can she respect you after this? Moron.

BTW, seriously, even if you ask, a TRUE friend would never fuck your wife. Never. The only reason this guy has been hanging around is to get what you gave up - the chance and the continuing right to fuck your wife (now ex-wife) anytime he wants. Moron.

My wife, my wife, my wife. What do they teach you? Is this some LW writer's recommendations? Name the person.

Not bad, but one sentence messed it up for me because mistakes like that bother me. Kind of anal I suppose, as I was a technical writer for awhile. “Her dark nipples could be seen through the opaque material.” Please look up the meaning of ‘opaque’. It WON’T be defined as ‘see-through’. If you have a pane of clear glass, it’s transparent and see-through. Paint it with a solid, heavy coat of paint and you can’t see through it any longer. It has become ‘opaque’. I know, picky, picky. Other than that, it’s always fun to see a hot, sexy woman enjoy a new cock in a positive experience. Even if she does have a numb-nuts husband.

I don’t think I’ll ever understand why a husband would enjoy the humiliation of seeing another man fuck his wife hard and also cum all over her face.

Made all 3 of them very happy.

Nice, long seduction ending in fulfillment!