Unless the humor part is your sentence structure, then it's funny in the "this adult isn't any better than a young child" sort of way. It totally negated any possibility that your story had any merit.
For those that read this. I apologize to those that feel that I have let them down recently. Life is never easy and I feel lost at the moment. The man who was my Father passed away in January and I have not been the same since. I have been unable to think, process things clea...