All Comments on 'Don't Hold Back, We're Here to Stay'

It's got all the makings of a good story, but you seriously need someone to do an edit scrub of what you write before you publish it.

Thank you for reading, yes editing is a challenge due to budget constraints but stay tuned for more.

Thank you for that, I will keep that in mind going forward

Sometimes there are things missed in the editing process, it didn't take away from the story for me. I hope we see more from them

Thanks for reading Prin, I am glad you enjoyed