All Comments on 'Don't Overthink It! Pt. 02'

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mammoetmammoetabout 1 year ago

Loved it a lot hope to read next chapter soon

creativeandfuncreativeandfunabout 1 year ago

Absolutely loved parts 1 and 2. So wonderful. Will part 3 contain the part where they have actual intercourse?

Frisky60Frisky60about 1 year ago

You have GOT to continue this story! I can’t wait to have them progress to full on fucking!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

These stories are very good. I like the progression of intimacy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well written with several appropriate subtleties.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Ok, near the end of the first section while he is adjusting the chair the line I gave her pussy a lick from bottom to top. Was that deliberate?

CristoforoColomboCristoforoColomboabout 1 year ago

Very uncomplicated story but very effective and erotic all the same. I'm looking forward to the next instalment too.

PrurientplayerPrurientplayerabout 1 year ago

These two stories are very well done. The progression in their sexual contact is gradual and yet feels inevitable, and the descriptions of their encounters is both sympathetic and very erotic. I can’t wait to read the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Such a bold overused premise to justify fucking. Ever tried using emotion?

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Writing smut for fun. Some fetishes work best as literature.

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