by NylonDreams
Chpt 1 was terrific. Chpt 2 was blah. Chpt 3 was OK. This whole thing has been too wordy/repetitive. Could have been done in 2 chpts.
Looking forward to more as it's been an enjoyable action packed read.
I loved it. Don't know why so few comments. Much better than the story that it was finishing. That was a nightmare to read with all the errors. I don't think I have ever read a basically good story with so many wrong words, this is so much better. Well done and thank you. Mel B known as Hornydevil47