All Comments on 'Dorian's Deal - Jake & Jill'

Is there more to come. I truly enjoy the story. AAAA++++

Kind of hard to follow at times but good.

I personally would have loved for Jill to be a part of their lives, and not just for being a girl.

She cared for both of them during their act, while Jake didn't quite care, at least for me.

He was very polite and sweet, it is true, but inevitably masculine in his jokes, as well as his reaction at the end.

In defense of the man it must be said that she did not expect it, and while Jill did not either, she was a professional Striper, so she was probably better able to moderate her behavior.

That said, I liked Jill's character more than Jake's.