All Comments on 'Dorks'

more!!! Like to get a nice description of those little titties.

Yay for Emily! This was so hot. It actually reminded me of how so many college hookups happened: coming completely out of nowhere to destroy my world for a while.

Marvelous story.

How do we learn what sex is? How do we first learn to Do It?

Thank you!

Well told. I felt like I was there!

good !st.time story .. I relly liked it's Hemmingway directness & brevity....

Loved it. Brought back memories of my own first time.

Well done!

Very good writing! 5 stars to writer. Excellent all around. Thank You

Second part?

So dorky, but oh so spicy! 🔥🔥

F=MA

Love this story. As others stated it’s a great flashback to a time when we were learning and exploring and discovering. Thank you for sharing this oh-so-arousing story.

we need that second part

Couldn't hsve been more real. Loved it.

Fantastic a great story that’s the second story of yours l think needs a second chapter come on girl you just can’t keep writing single chapters lol thanks xx Peter

Great story. I remember from my college days that some of the geeky little girls were huge pervs. I like her lack of experience but her desire to see him stroke his cock and then join him in showing her stuff off. I would love a sequel!

Loved it.

Plz part two

This was well written, bold and honest.

And then?

We know she’s going to get laid, but not before there are more twists and turns in the road - the condoms are too big/small - he comes down with the flu but she doesn’t want to wait - the possibilities are almost infinite

The phrase that entered my mind was "beautiful moment." There is a certain purity and innocence in their discovery of each other and themselves. The purity and innocence is not only because it is her first (maybe his too) but also because their tryst is unsullied with agendas outside of the sheer pleasure of discovery and play.

I also liked how you reveal her feelings about herself and her appearance. I won't speak for other men, but there is a broad range of what is attractive to me about women, and I have found many women prone to overly harsh self-evaluation and relatively unaware of their beauty and allure.