All Comments on 'Double Trouble in Helia Pt. 05'

Clearly this chapter isn't as well liked as the previous ones, which is a little unfortunate.

If you have any ideas or suggestions that might make the next chapters better, please share them.

I'm still working on the sixth chapter, but it takes a little time to work out some of the characters, which sadly doesn't result in work that I can upload.

It should be done in a day or two and uploaded some time after that.

@harroldfruit2: I think the reason for this chapter being 'not as well liked' is the almost magical disappearing and reappearing of appendages. The protagonist having two penises is not as hard to believe as him suddenly getting the ability to make at least one of them disappear/retract. It feels too convenient/fantastic in a world where everything else (other than the twin-organs, obviously) is grounded in reality.

I have to admit it was a little too convenient, but I did need a way to make Alex's appearance change when necessary for some (future) scenes.

The main drawback to this "ability" is that it obviously hurts a lot.

Don't expect it to be used often however, unless the situation calls for it.