All Comments on 'Dr Jackal and Ms Hyde Pt. 02'

Lots of typos and insufficient punctuation that Proof Reading should have uncovered. BUT, with a story this good these are easy to overlook, or even absorb.

So it gets even more interesting. You have a well thought out and fun story. I like how the thought of wealth made him willing to risk his health, safety and manhood. The story isn’t wrong though, you would be incredibly wealthy and famous if you could stabilize that formula. You would also have so many grateful trans people in the world but some incredibly angered sex reassignment doctors, nurses, surgeons and the like. I can’t wait for your next chapter.