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Click here"What, th' flyin' fook?"
Ferren was meekly peeking over a gold pile, his face a combination of amazement and horror and, while I know he would never admit it, arousal.
I turned myself over and, with weak knees, pushed myself up. My stomach churned as I moved, and I felt like I was containing an entire ocean in my gut. Wearily, I started shambling over towards him, exhausted, aching, and fucking pissed.
"Ferren...I'm going...to fucking...kill you."
Thank you so much for reading my first erotica! I only started writing this story a little over a week ago, and it's also the first time that I've tried writing since college, so if something seems wrong...it probably is.
I still have ideas that I'd love to try and get on paper, so let me know what I should fix the next time I try publishing!
- COMMENTS
SkyTheReaper3 months agoConsidering this was your first erotica, I’m very impressed! You did a great job with it, keep up the good work!
