All Comments on 'DragonStorm Ch. 01'

A fine start. Thanks

Another masterful beginning - and wonderful to see how Darian's ideas will be received.

Once again I detected one or two minor departures from the world created by Anne. But one thing that did stand out is how you focused my attention to the fact that Anne McCaffrey heavily demilitarized Pern. She restricted the weapons to blades for the most part. I hadn't snapped to that detail before now.

I'm pleased that you are continuing Darian's story with a new book. 4/5