by Head_of_the_House
My favorite story on this site, i hope you continue it. I think it would be very interesting if Saliah became more ambitious in her plans for Jack as forshadowed with the Korea thing.
I think including more character Jack has preexisting relationships with, like Emily, makes the story more interesting by raising the stakes and making the corruption more obvious.
I really really really hope this story isnt dead.
I am really liking the story and the direction it is taking. I do hope you are planning on continuing it.