by parawa
I really appreciate the details you put into describing your main character's routine and his interactions with the other characters. I wish you'd fleshed out the sex scenes you described. Two cocks, one pussy, give the deets!!!
Nice work :)
I love how much humanity this story has. These characters are living an extrodainary existence, yet your descriptions of them and their day to day make them relatable and very real. I don't miss the sex in this one, for I know you are more than capable of bringing it on when the time comes. A very nice end to the chapter! I'm excited to see what develops between them.