I really like this story, but on thing: the last crusade started 1270/1271, so your hero is most likely around 700 to 800 years old, not just 500. But this is not really important. Your story is still great! 👍
Best to read my stories by Date. Some of my early work is Not the best, learned as I went along. Re: 'Zach Ch: 8 Part Series' stories were re-numbered by the ADMIN. The 'Widow' is a series and 'Powers' is the other. One 3 part story, "Zach Ch. 01-03 The Widow Farmer" got m...