All Comments on 'Dry Valley Ch. 19'

has been mentioned in today's New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout which is in the Bulletin Boards

You did an excellent job of writing a difficult scene. This chain story has benefited greatly from your writing

Great work gotwood, this story wouldn't have been a true blue romance if there wasn't a bad guy!!! Great work, and thanks so much for bringing Jonis into our story. :D ~ Red.

Gotwood:

You took the legal road, but picture this: A naked body trussed up with barwire (or better yet razorwire). Bound by the hands, legs, Testicles, peter, and throat, tied to the bumper of a pickup truck traveling down a gravel road in the moonlight at 2 miles per hour. See what I mean? Otherwise a great continuation of a really fine story. Thank You. Ronnie W.