Ducklings

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Jamie failed to anticipate it being that big a deal, but knew a good thing when she heard it. She also recognized Carinne had chosen these words because it remained too soon to use a certain other four-letter word. She urged Carinne into the bed horizontally so they could lie together, and pulled the comforter over them. Carinne felt Jamie peck her cheek.

"You really are so beautiful."

"So're you."

"Oh...Carinne...I am not that beautiful."

"I respectfully and strongly disagree. I'm entitled to my opinion, and in what I felt of your face, I found true beauty."

"Well...they say beauty's skin deep."

"They also say it's in the eye of the beholder. But that's not really applicable for me, now is it."

"Heh! True. Well...good night, Carinne. Sleep tight. See ya in the mornin' light."

"Nighty-night, sweet dreams."

It took Jamie a little additional time to fall asleep, because she did a bit more thinking. This was...magical. Surreal. Unbelievable. Forty-eight hours ago, she was a melancholy, downhearted young lady with some damaging self-esteem issues. Now...not so much. She guessed it just went to show that like Carinne, life was full of surprises. Some were nice, some less than nice. And she knew she had to take the bad with the good. Maybe she didn't have all the answers yet. Maybe she didn't know what the future held for her and Carinne as far as tomorrow, or next month, or years from tonight. But in the wake of yesterday morning, one thing was for sure.

Jamie Himmelfarb was a truly much happier person.

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Arinderk75Arinderk7511 months ago

Paws, lassies, and a couple of other descriptors sure seemed out of place; and took away from the situation when they were used. Otherwise, an enjoyable story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
How blind?

Amongst legally blind people, the ones who are profoundly blind (no sight at all) from birth are relatively rare. Discussing what kind and degree of blindness Carinne has would definitely be part of getting to know her. Also, blind-from-birth people usually have no desire to see, because they don't miss it.

That song Seventeen hits home for me. I can't listen to it without the tears starting up. Thanks for putting it in a romantic context, that was very nice.

I like your story, it's a sweet little romance, full of laughter and fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wonderful

Will there be another chapter, hope so!!!!!!

miztreefrogmiztreefrogalmost 6 years ago
Enchanting

I didn't want the story to end. It leaves me with a warm fuzzy. Quite delightful.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wording

Found it annoying that you kept using the word paw instead of hand.

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