All Comments on 'Dumped at Sea'

by Jim Dogget

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very good, but . .

I really enjoyed this story. Needless to say, I (like most folks) are looking for a good sex story. Your story is unique in that the story was extremely well written, yet the sex was rather anti-climatic (no pun intended, really!) I really thought that our hero was going to have some kinky sex with the heroine; that it didn't turn out that way would normally have pissed me off. But like I said, your writing is quite exceptional, so I enjoyed it despite the lack of "kink"!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Too damn long

You could have got to the point of the story in a single page. It was WA-AA-AY longer than it needs to be.

Wendyll ThorneWendyll Thorneabout 18 years ago
Humped at Sea

Oh, man... what a fuckingly good story, such bad boys! Very sexily done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Sailor's fantasy

Good technical detail. No mistakes. Plausible characters, interesting. Unique story.

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