All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 14'

I hate to agree with the person who commented on the previous chapter, but a lot of sex but no real plot advancement. I know this is an erotic story, so sex is integral, but you are a talented story teller. I have read about 80% of your stories (need to read your Futa ones soon) and you mixed a compelling plot with excellent sex thrown in. I look forward to later chapters.

Chapter 15 is missing

plot plot where's the plot -.-

some of these shouldn't be in Sci-fi, always go with the most hardcore identifier so you don't surprise the audience. You can always have incest become sci-fi as it's down the shock scale.

@leakyfaucet: The category is Sci-fi & Fantasy, and it qualifies %100 as fantasy. It's Literotica's fault for putting the tags at the end of stories instead of the top of the first page.

I really hate cliff hangers!