All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 16'

Nice, but confusing... where's chapter 15?

Skipped chapter 15?

From the looks of it this is Chapter 15 and was just mislabeled.

I see we got chapter 15 now, and it definitely goes before this chapter chronologically. (NOT a mislabeling issue. Note the bit about the boots)

The sex is fun, but I actually find I read your stories more for the plot and ideas. Interested to see where you take the ideas in this one.

We know her name, we know his name, you don't need to be using the full names all the damn time mate. It's seriously annoying.

"For the next week, I spent much of my time training."

LIES.

Of the 15 previous chapters, only a third was used for plot progress. And that's with a little cheating, as the chapters that were crammed with smut were 2 full pages long and the ones that advanced the plot were a lot like this one: a page long, and not even a full page at that.

So, yeah. LIES.

Great chapter loved the BDSM (always best when it leaves all parties cumming) and story line. Good balance I think