All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 35'

I am at a loss for words. The depth of your imagination for the variety of stories you tell is amazing. Keep up the good works.

Love the ending and the new girls. Can’t wait for book 2. Keep up the good work

Fantastic work as always.

Just finished Book 1, what an amazing journey. Cannot wait see what book two has in store.

I gotta be honest, your writing is embarrassingly bad. The story line is "fine", but your grammar and prose is - grade 5 level, at best. Practice more complex structures, use a thesaurus, and plan out the storyline, chapterline, and the sex scenes so they flow instead of rattle around similar to a barrel of monkeys. And for the love of f"ing god stop repeating the same word/phrase in subsequent sentences.

Keep up