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All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 01'

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Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettover 1 year ago

An attempt at a recap, then an incest scene that was stretched WAY WAY WAY too long. You are by far way to repetitive, and stretch things out that have no business being stretched out for so long.

Priscilla_JunePriscilla_Juneover 1 year ago

I thought it was a perfect read. It was a brief enough and engaging story to keep attention and got me interested in reading more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great work. Don't listen to the critics. Pour all the words out, do not stop for anyone or anything. You add to the world simply by writing.

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