All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 06'

I'm looking forward to when the story continues.

Another trash 'chapter' of just sex. You really REALLY need plot dude, seriously.

Another 'chapter' that can be safely skipped for absolutely zero content.

This was a good story you are ruining it with to much sex.

The interaction between the main characters is marvelous, and important to the overall story. The plot here is very sexy, but establishes the relationship between the characters for future chapters.

If the other dungeon builders are at all like him... when would they have *time* to build any dungeon...?

Couple of notes: when building generic creatures like this, especially with unpronounceable names but in any case, a helpful trick for the reader is to have them all begin with the same letter. That way, the user can just remember the letter for the body type and know what skill set to expect when they're encountered. You don't have to have it as trite as "all Mermaids start with M, all Oozes start with O", but "All Oozes start with C", e.g., would be a boon to the reader.

Also, "peak of pleasure" not "peek of pleasure"

Need to toss some plot in between the sex scenes.