by mypenname3000
About damn time there was some plot. I don't expect it to last, maybe 1 or 2 more 'chapters' at best before you degenerate back to worthless sex scenes that don't do anything for plot.
I really enjoy this story, like others, I more like the plot advancing chapters, but you do you. You write what makes you happy, and keeps you wanting to write more, and if others do not approve, then they can go write a story that they like better, and leave your submissions to others.
Hi everyone!
I really love his story, and while it's true that I skipped most of the sex in the later chapters, as I'm more invested in the characters and plot now, you have a real talent for writing smut!
I look forward to reading more from you, AND DUDE YOU'RE FAST! You have posted 599 stories in less than a year, that's awesome! You keep doing you, I'll be sure to come back to read!
Best wishes
I suspect the dream is foreshadowing his future harem members' glyphs. So here are my predictions.
Morana the goth girl is obviously Death.
Terra the barista is Earth, because her name and her coffee stained tits looking like the earth.
Mrs. Lucina the neighbor is Light because she's glowing and talks about glowing.
Alizee the cheerleader is Wind because she's standing over a vent blowing up her skirt.
Hagane is Metal because of the steel rims and her name is japanese for steel.
Ms. Trueno the teacher is Fire because she's Hispanic and they are stereotyped as having firey and passionate personalities.
Crystal is Ice because of her personality towards the MC.
Nina Naughty is Thunder because she's moaning and jiggling? And also process of elimination.