All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 10'

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Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettover 1 year ago

Why is there still 'recap' things going on 10 'chapters' in? That should have been over and done with in the very FIRST chapter of this 'book'. And you still are doing 90% sex, not every chapter has to have sex in it. Yeah, we're on a porn site, i get it, but we're also on a literature site, meaning there needs to be plot development other than 'oh lord leo choke me with your dick' from every unimportant monster. I can nearly guarantee that nobody knows any names of the monsters aside from the main ones, they are just that pointless and add nothing but numbers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Another excellent (if rather too short) chapter in this amazing series. Plot and erotic romance here merge into a seamless whole, perfectly balanced throughout. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Whatever you do, don't listen to Kaleb.

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