by mypenname3000
The plot thickens! Definitely like that things kicked off again. Good chapter, here.
It’s genuinely weird that you keep specifying lana’s last name. There isn’t another lana in the story; it’s completely unnecessary.
I'm enjoying this particular story of yours more and more with each chapter. Perhaps it's just me but I feel your storytelling is getting better as it unfolds. Well done. Keep it up.