All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 13'

To short.

Lots of plot and battles in the last two chapters, I love it! Keep the plot going, mate, that's the most important part!

You should have just combined this chapter with the last and released it as one chapter when you were finished writing it. Better to have a well written complete chapter that's released a little later than you'd like, than two underdeveloped halves that get released early. Just sloppy craftsmanship. Although, I don't know why I'm expecting anything else out of this story at this point...

Love the story and all the monsters and all, but why do I feel like Leo falls into victory instead of succeeding? Almost all of his wins are a struggle right until the end where he just barely pulls out a victory but is completely decimated from it. And it was won by pure dumb luck. Just getting boring seeing a repeat of this scenario for every battle.

Five stars!!!☆☆☆☆☆