All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 18'

The problem with these sex scenes is they drag on for WAY too long. Seriously, he's 'on edge' for like 5 paragraphs, with the same shit being repeated in each paragraph just with different wording. If the quality of the sex was better it wouldn't be as bad, but it's so repetitive and happens so often there's no meaning to it, especially with dozens of filler fuck holes.

@Kaleb, That could have been worded less bitterly, but I kind of agree that the main point of this story is more on the adventure than on the sex. MPN, our author, is slowly realizing it.

Let's encourage him on his previous efforts for plot, battle and character development heavy chapters, those are the ones that really matter, I'll gladly support 10 more chapters of low-meaning sex (it's not exactly meaningless, but it doesn't either advance the plot much) for more of this adventure!

On a positive side note, we got a major plot development (he's leveled up, yay!) along with the sex scene. I don't expect much of the next chapter in terms of plot, but I sure hope we can get a good description of each kind of new monster girl before the inevitable orgy.

There's a track to this story, and it's going somewhere. I even have a theory about the main villain/opponent. That would be fire guy the reluctant tyrant, the experienced dungeon keeper who seemingly plays nice.

I think he has very few runes but a lot of sources of mana and that he's building up the opposite to himself, a dungeon keeper with lots of runes and very few sources of mana, in order to be able to steal all the runes in one go by killing him, which should be easy with lvl 3 or 4 girls.

What do you think?

Best regards

I thoroughly enjoy the narrative and am excited to delve deeper into the story! Thank you for sharing this engaging tale with us. However, I have a question that lingers in my mind. Instead of introducing new monster girls, why not consider upgrading the existing ones to Level 2 and beyond? In RPG games, upgrading current minions is a common strategy to optimize resources and prevent unnecessary drain on memory. It could also reduce the challenge of incorporating numerous characters, both existing and new, into the evolving storyline. I've noticed a decreasing focus on mermaids and oozes, and introducing additional Level 2 characters could be overwhelming. While introduction of new characters bring in the variety, readers who have invested time in the series value the story arc over the sheer quantity of sexual conquests by Leo. This is merely a suggestion and author knows whats best for his story. Once again, thank you for your contribution.