All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 22'

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Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettabout 1 year ago

And three for three of pointless fucking that I predicted would happen. Now I predict that there will be maybe 1/3 of the next will be token 'story' and back to more pointless fucking.

CortavarCortavarabout 1 year ago

🤣😂🤣😂 Bhaaloo the werebear! Be careful not to get caught by the Mouse*, but I love the reference!

*I doubt they'd have a case, don't worry, as the Jungle Book is public domain now, and as you're just making a passing reference.

bhojobhojoabout 1 year ago

Actually Bhalu is hindi for Bear so the mouse has no copyright on it. Garjan means a deep animal cry. Many of the names are hindi so I wonder if our author knows hindi or is using translation to choose names.

CortavarCortavarabout 1 year ago

@Bhojo thanks for the clarification, I'm glad I came back to learn something new!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Maybe now we can return to the plot? *fingers crossed*

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Some of these names are quite jarring. Also, maybe a bit more focus on the plot would have been good, instead of the, by now, rather repetitive sex scenes.

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