All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 30'

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mektig15mektig15about 1 year ago

As an idea for the future. Is it possible Leo can "upgrade" his girls? Use a portion of the "new mana" to make his tier 1 girls a tier 2 girl? Keep their mind and memories but just give them the tier 2 bodies. Maybe if it's not "possible" in this world because it hasn't been tried before maybe Leo is the first to try. Especially after he fought so hard and succeeded by the skin of his teeth if that is what will happen.

theevilsmurf42theevilsmurf42about 1 year ago

Why does Garnet suck so much?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Leo is overlooking obvious tactics. 1, he should have engaged the invaders outside if his labyrinth, so that he could keep respawning his girls to reinforce themselves. 2., he should've set up his levers to drop water from above and flood the main area they were all in, eather than just have a few trapdoors open to pits. Using lightening to electrify the water electrocutes everything touching the water, so insta-death everywhere. 3, the spells take WAY to much time to say, so have a self-healing spell ready to go except for the final word, then save your breath for fighting then say that final word when it's needed, as your dying gasp. Sure there's more but I'm tired of typing :-P

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