All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 34'

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CortavarCortavarabout 1 year ago

Yay! It's back!

Some sexy times ahead with the new summons, then we'll move forward with the heart of the plot: more buildings and more fights!

Although I'm genuinely curious about the new earth and metal girls from Earth, I'm really chomping at the bit for Led and the dungeon's expansion!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This chapter was empty and led nowhere, you could have skipped and just got to creating the companions from earth or restoring Halia and it would have been more interesting than this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Your writing has improved dramatically through out this story line. Keep up the good word. I’m interested to see where you take it.

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