All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 40'

The stories are about 90% sex and 10% story. That is quite out of balance for a long running narrative like it seemed to be at the beginning.

Is this a continuation of 39, or a retelling of 39 from a different viewpoint?

I'm sorry, but I'm done... too many chapters of the same thing, over and over again. The sex is just so vanilla. You actually did better when you worked to further the actual plot line.

What the hell is making that tapping?! Please keep going. Must have next.

Three new installments. Read maybe a handful of lines in all.

Lots of booring sex. No plot advancement whatsoever.

So I feel like the fact that he didn't make the level 1 monster girls goes against his character. Your the author and it your character. It feels that he is becoming like the twins only focused on the best. The level one monster girls have uses and allow for a greater dynamic between the summoned girls and almost there subordinates. Also could you maybe have the list of characters like in owning a maid harem as that is really useful. Maybe not for each but like every 5. Also would like to know the reason each part is only like max 4000 words where as some of your others are 12000?

Anon, it's not like he isn't going to create other level 1s I don't think. He just has strong feelings about the ones he skipped.