All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 03 Ch. 22'

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CortavarCortavar7 months ago

Well, it looks like daddy's coming!

He seems well-prepared and OP, but did he expect a dragon?

Bobjohnson1978Bobjohnson19787 months ago

This would be far better if all these were combined. It’s finished 2 minutes after you start reading which is annoying.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Ok, well written, but as others have said… just too damn short.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hate cliffhangers. Always drop the chapter by a point. Otherwise, a great story.

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