All Comments on 'Dungeon Fantasies'

by kawaiiSkittles

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
weird

I'm not sure why you are adding the metamorphosis. The story is way too confusing with that aspect. I think the story could stand by itself without that touch. Or add the metamorphosis without the dungeon. This is a clash of two different scenarios.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved it! Reminds me of Animagus

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