All Comments on 'Dungeons and Dalliances Ch. 150-159'

Still loving it

I'm glad they're all back in their own bodies again!! I really the story but this part fell completely flat for me. I'm sure there are those that loved it though. Really looking forward to Nat taking her revenge on Ana in the coming chapters!

I am enjoying this too much, keep up the good work!

What a great developing story! Looking forward to the next level.

I agree with YungMasta, these last few chapters have fallen pretty flat for me. Far too late for that to matter, as the story has already continued, but seeing Nat go from clueless to spineless (oops, I think she's supposed to be "submissive") isn't good.

Agree with the others on the last two chapters just being very mid. It’s very well written but I definitely just skimmed most of it. All that insecurity and just.. I don’t really know how to put it. Inadequacy? It’s too much and piled on THICK. Very much hoping for a bit of a turnaround but we’ll see I suppose

Very interesting developing tale. I’m enjoying it very much, thanks indeed!

Thanx for writing! You’re an ace!

Wow. Other comments are pretty wide of the mark. I expect they may be more heavily invested in the smut aspect.

Found you on patron and want to throw some money your way but not up for a subscription. Would mind putting up some other options?