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by JackDeveraux

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zed0zed0over 14 years ago
Weird

Serious attempt, well written (I think), but kinda weird.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Keep writing

I have to tell you, this story has been written many many times. And words cannot really convey such moments mate. But the last sentence points the way to the future; i liked it.

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