All Comments on 'East and West Cum Together Ch. 03'

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Wiz1002Wiz10022 months ago

Another gem of a chapter.

I love the way you slowly and carefully take us through this swinging initiation without going full on sexual olympics, with foursomes in the same room, DP, anal, lesbianism, bondage etc etc!!

The pace is just right and Max and Paul seem to know how to get Sunita and Raj to participate without the nervousness and guilt that would throw it off course.

However if did think it was unacceptable that (secret) sex between Sunita and Max was deemed acceptable but if it were between Max and Raj it would be cheating. I did note that you did qualify this by stating most guys would think it hot and turn a blind eye to it if his wife went full on rug-munching with another girl, so as this is true, I’ll let it pass 😜

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