All Comments on 'Eat Me One'

I've heard of a deep-seated desire, but, until now, never a deep-seeded desire.

Dude, please get an editor or a proofreader! Volva vs vulva, sent vs scent, witch vs which, etc. The numerous spelling errors were just too much to take!

He'll be doing that a lot more until she realizes what a wimp he is and then kicks him to the curb. Beginning of the end of a marriage. He'll be much better off without her.

A horrible story, made even worse by absolutely hopeless writing, spelling mistakes by the boatload.

Deep. Seated.

Fuck me, what an evil bitch. Any guy that allows this to happen needs to hand their man card immediately. Sucking another man’s cum out of your wife? Jesus, what a sick proposition that would result in immediate walkout and a swift divorce. I’m still gagging.

Sorry, but I've never been able to do anything with mentally ill women! However, after the divorce and the lawsuit against Dr. Stone, I would be a wealthy bachelor again and could really enjoy life with lots of sexy and sane women.

If only there was some way to convince my wife to do this to me!

Bullshit. Unless he is gay he wouldn’t go with it. He would throw her out and find a better woman. She is disgusting. It will be even worse when they both get HPV. Then he would hate her and destroy her life.

@Twentyseven, you stole my line!

When a story can't even reach a score of 2 you know it has to suck.

The high points are the god-awful spelling & grammatical errors.

I have no squeamish feelings about cum but your female character is bullshit. "I love my husband who has never shown me anything but respect" SAD

Story was good, but proof read before submitting. It takes away the good with all the mental breaks

But I'm not hungry!

3

As the others have said, there were just too many mistakes to really enjoy what could have been a good story. The ending was great. You wrote, ""Melisa, you know I had to brush my teeth three times, and I still haven't gotten the taste of his jizz out of my mouth yet."

I have said the exact same thing to my wife a thousand times. After 20 years of marriage, to a very hot wife, I've probably guzzled 50 gallons of other men's cum. She usually sits on my face and feeds their cum to me.

Sometimes, I will lay on my back, with her above me in the 69 position. As they fuck her, their cum and her juices splatter down on my face the whole time.

My wife and I believe that is what a good husband should do.

Well done, you have described the mind of a selfish disgustingly vile woman.

Bottom line; cheating, whore, skank, intentionally disrespects, tries to humiliate, and cucks husband. Poorly written story about a vile disgusting wife.

I wonder if this author is really a woman, not a man? "She" appears to be a vile cheating whore who gets off on writing stories abou;t vile, cheating whores who betray, disrespect, humiliate and chuck their husbands. The author writes a fair incest story, but "she" seems incapable of writing anything beyond her formula whore/cuck stories.

At least make the trash recyclable!

Story describes what cheating is all about.....Greed, opportunity and a lack of caring for your spouse or relationship partner.

You write really well, but your spelling often stops me dead in my tracks reading. It’s very distracting when a word as common as “bra” is spelled “braw,” and there were several other such examples. I liked your work, but this truly was distracting.

Some people need to learn this is a work of fiction. If you don't like these types of stories then don't read them.

I like licking others cum off tits and from pussy.

She licks the other woman off my cock, I clean her pussy. We are both happy.

To all the idiots who advise people to not read something they don’t like.

Just HOW the fuck do you, brain dead can like or dislike something you do not read?!???????

Mazarf Akar (yours)

Had you down as a favorite. No more. See you….bye