All Comments on 'Educating the Daughter Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoying the read but next chapter, Mom, Dave and of course we teach Brad bringing him into the circle to educate him. Thanks for writing

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 2 years ago

Kim just needs to face the fact that Brad is a shitty lover and that she should dump him. Once she does that, she's free to continue the threesomes with mom and Dave.

In regards to the story, do yourself a favor and get an editor or a proofreader. Too many run-on sentences and grammar errors. Three stars.

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I write for my pleasure, it's not perfect and I don't pretend to be a great writer. My writing is fantasy, it makes me horny and I hope it does the same for my readers.