All Comments on 'Eighty One - Laura's Story Pt. 04'

Love it!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! She needs to be further degraded!!!

Unfortunately, this doesn't feel like it is going anywhere.....

Great story, but I think it would be kinda nice if she found at least a couple of pieces. She's trying hard and continual failure despite her efforts just makes it appear like the odds are very unfairly being stacked against her. And stacking the odds is cheating.

Feels like just another hopeless downwardspiral story right now.

I want to root for her but I´m starting to burn out my emotional interest already.