by James Kirkland
This story is great! It is very hot and also captures perfectly the tone of the show! I find myself muttering the base line pokka-pokka! All TV show stories should be this good! It really does the job 'cause I wish they'd REALLY MADE THIS EPISODE!!! :)
IF THIS WERE THE REAL TV VERSION YOU'D NEVER GET CANCELLED BUT YOU'VE JUST GOT TO CONTINUE AND HAVE SOMEBODY SHOOT CUM ALL OVER ELAINE'S PRETTY FACE AND ELAINE EAT'S OUT BAB'S KRAMER
YOU SHOULD BE CROWNED KING OF THE WRITERS'BUT ONLY IF YOU CONTINUE THIS FOREVER AND BEYOND AND LET ELAINE GET FUCKED BY SOMEONE WITH A HUGE COCK'' HEY I SAW A SHOW YODAY THAT MIGHT MAKE FOR GOOD READING''[RAVEN] I WOULD LOVE TO READ ABOUT THOSE BIG FUCKIN TITS GETTIN SUCKED BY THAT WHITE GIRLFRIEND OF HERS'CHELSEA \' I THINK
really nice erotic spin on the show. Very typical of George to miss out on the real fun. Good writing!