All Comments on 'Elaine, Jackson and I Ch. 01'

A very hot first chapter! Elaine will want a lot more.

humiliation and emasculation have always been a turn-on for me. Cuckolding was a logical extension of this. Thanks for the story

Love the story, can`t wait for the next chapter.

grrrrr

Your story here offers a little more of the detail some of might be looking forward to which is good. A little more conflict internally and externally with the subject personalities is warranted - tired of immediate capitulation.

Overall, I liked the concept, but what are the chances a guy with a four-inch dick is going to be married to a woman who's as hot as described? Men don't have to be underendowed to want to see their wives fucked by other men. I agree with Prairieboy, more build-up would have improved the story greatly. What gorgeous woman is going to go off with a guy she just met with her husband only a few minutes from returning?

Just "suck it up" cuckold. LOL