All Comments on 'Elaine Takes Her Punishment'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Love this

Really enjoyed this

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Short, sharp and almost believable!

My money is on her calling him within 3 days, and submitting to him more, every encounter! Bravo!!

Paul4playPaul4playover 3 years ago

Great fun!

And very well-written, too!

More, please.....

alanhomerjalanhomerjover 3 years agoAuthor

Only going to be 5 parts to this one guys. There is a new series coming, 2 stories so far, action is driven by the requests of a reader. They are her fantasies. I hope you enjoy them as much as this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

it was fun but she gave up easily at ths end so not so fun 4/5 stars

had she been more stubborn at the end it would have been more hotter

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Married man living in Yorkshire, senior manager by day, freak by night. My stories are all written for Ladies! They are all real people that have asked me to document their fantasies and desires. Most of the story direction is their request. If you want me to write yours, g...

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